Analytical Reflection

Analytical Reflection
To summarize on the mock oral presentation for my proposed project, I feel that I am able to work on the important points that I am lack of currently.

First of all, for the preparation I feel that it’s like racing against time to balance and work on the deadline for our proposed report. Hence there is not sufficient time to practice on my part for the presentation. I would tend to emphasize on the correct pronunciation of words as I tend to communicated in mandarin when I find difficulties to pronounce some words. In order to express myself better to my audience, I should do multiple rehearsal for my part so that to prepare me well during the actual day. In addition, for the pronunciation, I should maintain my speed of speech and concentrate on the words that I wants to speak and not rush through it. Most importantly I should be confident with what I would like to express and through frequently practice,  I will be able to pronounce fluently.

For the part on delivery, beforehand I had written and started memorizing the script on my product on how should I deliver them to the audience. During the mock presentation, I tend to confuse myself on my points to elaborate. In order to improve on this point, I should deliver the speech with a clearer concept and with important key points and understand my product well instead of memorizing.

The mock presentation gave me a good opportunity to encounter the mistakes and able to correct them before the actual presentation. This will help me to improve and correct prior to the actual presentation.

Comments

  1. Hello Wensong!

    Glad that you are well prepared for your final presentation. During your final presentation you sound confident and was clear of your proposed idea. However, you might want to rephrase some sentence in the second paragraph.

    Overall, it is nicely written and shows the amount of effort you put in for this presentation! All the best for the other presentations in future (:

    Best regards,
    Zhi Ling

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  2. Hey Wensong!

    First of all, good job! Even though during the mock presentation, you made some mistakes here and there but nevertheless you did really well for your final presentation. You were composed, clear and confident during your presentation.

    On the side note, you might want to read through again as there are some minor language issue here and there. For instance, "Hence there will not sufficient time...", you might want to say "Hence, there was insufficient time for preparation...".

    Last but no the least, the content is good and shows that you are determine to do better the next time. Wish you all the best for your future presentations.

    Best regards,
    Jason Huang

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  3. Hi WenSong,

    Good job on your actual presentation! The amount of efforts you put in have definitely not gone to waste as you did well during your actual presentation!

    I can understand your emphasis on pronunciation as I personally spoke mandarin at home too nevertheless I believe that with adequate practice, we will be able to articulate the words fluently and correctly.

    Look forward to more of your presentation and all the best for your future presentations!

    Cheers
    Shermaine Tan

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