Analytical Reflection
To summarize on the mock oral presentation for my proposed
project, I feel that I am able to work on the important points that I am lack
of currently.
First of all, for the preparation I feel that it’s like
racing against time to balance and work on the deadline for our proposed
report. Hence there is not sufficient time to practice on my part for the
presentation. I would tend to emphasize on the correct pronunciation of words
as I tend to communicated in mandarin when I find difficulties to pronounce
some words. In order to express myself better to my audience, I should do
multiple rehearsal for my part so that to prepare me well during the actual
day. In addition, for the pronunciation, I should maintain my speed of speech
and concentrate on the words that I wants to speak and not rush through it.
Most importantly I should be confident with what I would like to express and
through frequently practice, I will be
able to pronounce fluently.
For the part on delivery, beforehand I had written and
started memorizing the script on my product on how should I deliver them to the
audience. During the mock presentation, I tend to confuse myself on my points
to elaborate. In order to improve on this point, I should deliver the speech
with a clearer concept and with important key points and understand my product
well instead of memorizing.
The mock presentation gave me a good opportunity to
encounter the mistakes and able to correct them before the actual presentation.
This will help me to improve and correct prior to the actual presentation.
Hello Wensong!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you are well prepared for your final presentation. During your final presentation you sound confident and was clear of your proposed idea. However, you might want to rephrase some sentence in the second paragraph.
Overall, it is nicely written and shows the amount of effort you put in for this presentation! All the best for the other presentations in future (:
Best regards,
Zhi Ling
Hey Wensong!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, good job! Even though during the mock presentation, you made some mistakes here and there but nevertheless you did really well for your final presentation. You were composed, clear and confident during your presentation.
On the side note, you might want to read through again as there are some minor language issue here and there. For instance, "Hence there will not sufficient time...", you might want to say "Hence, there was insufficient time for preparation...".
Last but no the least, the content is good and shows that you are determine to do better the next time. Wish you all the best for your future presentations.
Best regards,
Jason Huang
Hi WenSong,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your actual presentation! The amount of efforts you put in have definitely not gone to waste as you did well during your actual presentation!
I can understand your emphasis on pronunciation as I personally spoke mandarin at home too nevertheless I believe that with adequate practice, we will be able to articulate the words fluently and correctly.
Look forward to more of your presentation and all the best for your future presentations!
Cheers
Shermaine Tan